Hilary guest app DR

if there is anything wrong with this, let me know!
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Yep! This is my character Hillary for this group >> who is the first of the new rank adventurer! Which is only for guests, which she is. Btw, Hillary is missing an eye. She has a blindfold to keep debris out of her only eye. (which is the one that is covered.)
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Name: Hillary

Gender: Female

Age:
17.5(cat years) the age in the ref sheet is wrong, sorry about that.

Breed: Blue point saimese

Rank: Guest (Adventurer)

Crush: Vik

Character traits: Brave, sarcastic, arrogant, secretive,faithful, hard working, adventurous,intelligent, and obedient.

Personality: Hillary is a she-cat who likes to put up a front for others so they can't see the nice she-cat she really is. She likes having
other cats always guessing and wondering about her, so she makes up tales about how she lost her other eye to keep them interested in
her, because being a young cat can be lonely and usually no cat wants anything to do with them. The Saimese she-cat wonders why she was chosen to explore the dangers of the castle at such a young age, to cheer her up about it sometimes she likes startling other for fun,
when she's not trying to obey and going out into danger and exploring, she has quite an attitude and can be quite saracstic and arrogant. But inside she is
very insucure about her new look because of her missing eye. Usually she's quite and does what she's told but, get her angry and she can pack quite a punch.


role play example: Keeping to the shadows of the dusty ominous castle, the sly and secretive saimese she-cat padded silently through the castle
As she made her way carefully through the dark castle's corrodors she kept repeating her orders in her head. Okay... go to the main room,
turn left and head down the hallway and go through the kitchen, and take a right at the shelves... and climb the starirs, then take yet another left and
go to the library to clean the room there. she thought to herself. She had been given these orders by a cat she had just met the other day,
he seemed nice, though she knew she couldn't trust any cat in the castle. Arriving at the library the Siamese cat sneezed. boy is it dusty in here! I wonder why I was sent here, what could possibly be hidden in here? she wondered.
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Friendships:


= Uncertainty
= Acquaintance/Friend
= Good friend/Best friend
= Crush
= Love/Mate
-Discomfort
- Confusion
= Dislike/loathe

- Sconcia- I'm not so sure that I can say that I like her, which I DONT. As soon as I entered that castle she was suspicious of me.

- Raziel, I'm not sure about him yet-

-About Neon, I think that's she is plain out MEAN!

-Nikolai, Well, he sure sounds and acts nice enough.

: - Nicco is... such a betraying bastard! I freaking hate his guts!!

- Steban, there's something creepy about that cat!

- Vik is a nice cat- and i'm proud to say that I- kind of... like him more than a friend.

- Snow is such a mean cat, I think it would be best to ignore her.

- Adalwulf sounds and acts nice towards me. He's interesting...

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Quick backstory: When she was younger, her mother loved both her sister and her equally and loved them very much. But her sister had a slight jealousy that only grew as she got older, she saw how her sister always got the toms that she wanted, and she wanted to have them too. It came to the point when her sister Hawk challenged her, they battled and Hawk who felt that she couldn't believe she fought her sister ran away.
That's when things changed for her mother, she missed her second daughter and started to ignore Hilary and started thinking of Hawk as her only daughter. After a few months her mother abandoned her, but she waited... and waited... for seasons for her but she never came back. Giving up, she found a new life in the alleys that she was left in. She eventually named a tom who was dappled, she never got his name but she loved him. With liking so many toms comes with conciquences, and she was blind to the secrets he kept.
The tom had anger issues, and she was hurt and beat by him when ever he went through his phase she liked to call it. During one of them, the tom cornered her and tore out her second eye. Feeling betrayed and heart-broken, she promised to never fall in love again the cat had learned her lesson. But who can control their heart, no cat can, she ripped up shirt that she found in a junkyard and used it to cover her missing eye because she despised the way she looked.
After a month of feeling sorry for herself she got an invitation from an unknown cat, it gave her directions to a place. Following them she reached a dark castle that loomed up in front of her. Gathering all her bravery she entered it, to be continued.